haiku 5301

and you disappeared
on the night of the new moon —
I still feel your pull

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About Ray Sharp

Father, poet, triathlete, local public health planner
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4 Responses to haiku 5301

  1. Whimsy Mimsy says:

    That is a good one…very well done. 🙂

  2. Nicole says:

    I love the way you connected the thought of missing someone with the pull of the moon.

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