spring love tanka

it is rain that melts
the winter’s snow, better than
any sunny day

like your tears that wore away
the stony husk of my heart


About Ray Sharp

Father, poet, triathlete, local public health planner
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3 Responses to spring love tanka

  1. Oh, Ray, you have a way with these Japanese forms. You make them sing.

  2. Beautiful tanka ~ I like the contrast of tears and stony husk ~

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