it is rain that melts
the winter’s snow, better than
any sunny day
like your tears that wore away
the stony husk of my heart
Oh, Ray, you have a way with these Japanese forms. You make them sing.
Beautiful tanka ~ I like the contrast of tears and stony husk ~
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Ray Sharp, The Bard of Liminga