man observed at mcdonald’s
on a starry night
legs like comets
belly like jupiter
hanging over the asteroid belt
what is the period
of the revolution?
I love it when you go all science in your metaphors, Ray.
thanks, marya. it’s not a great poem, but i was just using wifi at McD’s on a drive home last night and jotted this down.
Hilarious, despite all else.
I love this, Ray. Makes me want to revisit Carl Sagan all over again.
I have found you through marie marshall. we are hoping you’ll provide art for a poetry book
I’m still willing to do the art, just waiting for the green light.
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Ray Sharp, The Bard of Liminga