second draft: second draft

you wrote
if you think you is
the same you in all this
and i knew i was there

those two trees
and all the wading birds
primordial and other
clichés that apply

i shouted out
who killed the dinosaurs
when after all
it was you and me



About Ray Sharp

Poet, athlete, retired public health planner
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1 Response to second draft: second draft

  1. I enjoyed your pronoun play.

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